My first thought when reading through your paper is that the beginning
is somewhat repetitive, it takes you three sentences which all basically say
the same thing before you begin to introduce your point. Also, you should
probably keep the reference to outside works to be a little smaller than the
analysis of Crime and Punishment, because they should remain as examples, as
opposed to analyses of other works that are similar to Crime and punishment. I
have no qualms about the actual writing of the essay, mostly the structure and
references.
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