Comment on Alexia's paper

I think Alexia is on the right track with her term paper. The writing is concise and fluid and she provides a lot of details in a short space. I like her transitions and how she moved from paragraph to paragraph. Maybe in the beginning she can elaborate a little more on Dostoyevsky's life before jumping into the analysis of Raskolnikov and Crime and Punishment. That's the only constructive criticism I can provide for the rest of her paper is pretty good so far. Compared to mine, I feel like mine is not eloquent enough.