So far I think
your paper is going in a good direction. You are not straying from your topic
and explaining it thoroughly without summarizing the novel as a whole. I like the
directness of your writing but I do have to say that in some of your sentences
in the first paragraph. In some of
the sentences you should change the structure a little bit just because a lot
of them start with “He” or “His” and it can be a little distracting when
reading and take away from what you are trying to convey in your paper. Overall, your paper reads well and
sounds good.
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