Comment on Alexia's Post

I am going to start with a gramtical check and then get into the essay as a whole. This is in chronological order. "that Raskolnikov that" in the first sentence I believe the second "that" was not supposed to be there. "Becomes to detoriate due to his guilt" I believe is supposed to be "Becomes too detoriated due to his guilt". "As he struggled whether or not to..." I believe you mean "struggles". (I really hope this is not sounding condescending- please tell me if you just want me to focus on the writing as a whole next time). "seperation between himself and society to grow as he grows" (I would reccomend word variaton with grows as I feel it would flow more nicely).
Other than gramatical reccomendations I thought the post as a whole was well done. The only other thing I would like to point out is that there is not really a transition into your last paragraph. I would reccomend making a more distinct connection between that and the paragraph before it.