Your essay so far is very good and
the main suggestion I have is that you try to split up what you have so far, I
am not sure if it is supposed to be one large paragraph, or the spacing did not
show up. Another comment I have is that you go into a lot of detail about
Dostoyevsky, which is very good, but you should probably start talking about the
book a little bit sooner, or cut down on some of the details because I feel
they take up just a little too much space. Other than that the writing is very
good and I can’t quite tell where you transition into your thesis, but that could
just be the spacing not showing up.
Thanks for taking the time to that, I feel strongly about this and so really like getting to know more on this kind of field. Do you mind updating your blog post with additional insight? It should be really useful for all of us.
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