Overall I think that the essay is good, the writing is good
and consistent, but you take a little too long, in my opinion to address the
main subject of the essay and get to discuss the actual book. Also, you should
spend less time saying what each poem does not exactly do in comparison, but
focus more on what aspects do correlate with Dostoyevsky. Other than that, I do
not really have too many other suggestions.
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